Deviant Dimensions - Chronicles

Good start, has potential... But Author, when are you releasing more chapters?

I just started the novel but I think it's off to a good start I'm looking forward to reading more chapters

very excited for this novel! So far it has been a very interesting start.

storyline, plot and characters keeps me stick and wanting more, I still wish to see some sidekicks characters get their spin-off parts, especially Yanli and Gu Chengyi ❤ this story keeps me entertained , well done

Asta looked at the statue of a previous Wizard King.

"Aaagghh!" he screamed, clutching his arm as he hissed in Parseltongue. His sleave started to burn before he quenched it, leaving his skin beat red. That part actually took some look-changing devil magic to accomplish, but Harry was proud of himself. A Magical Girl staff should hurt a Dark Lord if he touched it, right?

I didn't ignore Neo either. The dimunitive girl was still watching me from the door, too. A creepy smile was plastered on her face, and I had no idea what inane things could be going on in her head. However, as I got out of bed, I felt that I wanted to know just exactly why these two criminals were in my apartment.

Students chatter and laugh as they walk to their lockers or wherever they hang out in mornings. It's loud and crowded and Jaslene is jostled as she makes her way to her locker, grimacing when a stray elbow or bag brushes against one of her wounds. She's already getting anxious and school hasn't even started yet.