Dear Ghost I Fell in Love With

Please give this a try and let me know what you think. This is my first time writing a novel, so we will see how it goes.

Five stars for motivation, keep up the good work Author san

I read it up to chapter 15. In my opinion, this book has the potential to be an engrossing novel if the author learns from his mistakes when he is writing this book. You can't say much about the whole book when it has only this many chapters but the characters are fine, they don't have much depth and they are a little cliché but you can read without feeling anger about them every chapter. Mc is not stupid and we see that he thinks before taking action, so he has some common sense in his head and you may like him (some even may say that he is smart) and for sure he is not a person who thinks only by his lower body parts, there are problems with him like author make him extremely cold in some situation but sometimes he behaves like petty and very emotional but nothing that can't be changed for the better later in the story.  Worldbuilding is great and very interesting, but you just need to lower your expectations a bit to enjoy it if you have high standards.  Updates are chaotic sometimes you have so many chapters that you think is Christmas and other days there are none for 2 days.  The author responds to comments so he is engaged in this novel and for now, it seems like he cares a lot about the book and tries to learn to make it better, for me, that is a huge plus.  In my opinion, if made well this can be more than mediocre but if the author doesn't learn from his mistakes or stop trying to improve this can be worse than mediocre. It's worth trying if you like Villain MC and have some time to spear and help this author shine by leaving your opinion in the comments.  I wish you a marvelous day, friends from around the globe.

Hehe author here! For me, I definitely believe that this book is a 5 star. I know it might seem arrogant of me, but I truly have an idea planned out for this novel. It seems like an ordinary story for now, but I guarantee you that in later chapters there are so much more things that you guys don't know that are yet to be revealed ;) I have the confidence that you guys will definitely be a little surprised at least around the middle of the novel.

Sementara sulur2 membentuk ayunan, ya.. Sebuah rumah besar dengan latar belakang sungai yang jernih.

"Yah, she should be fine." Shiro nodded as he finished up

     At this point Morire knew he was in serious trouble and he thought to beg them, he knelt down and said, "Please sir, please don't do this to me, please!"

We Can Not Lose