Dangerous Survival in the Apocalypse

So far, the writing is clean and well-structured, so kudos to the translator. I’ve read up to the fifth chapter, so I can’t provide an in-depth analysis yet, but while the story does use a few clichés, it doesn’t overdo them. It was also a great relief to find that this isn’t another typical reincarnated main character (MC) story. While the reincarnation trope can add some excitement, it can also get tiresome when everyone uses it. The character development looks promising, and from the author’s notes, I can confirm that it will take a while for the MC and the main love interest (ML) to fall in love. , it seems very promising; I just have to wait for new chapters to really see where it goes.

What I love so much about this story is how well the character development is handled. The interactions between each character feel so natural.

The downside is that there are a few coincidences or plot holes that make the story’s pace feel rushed at times. However, overall, the pacing is just right, and perhaps you can overlook the plot holes.

MC and ML's relationship progresses very slowly. It starts as a dog-and-master dynamic, then shifts to a little-son-and-father scenario (though only Shen Shian sees himself as the father), and later evolves into a possessive-younger-brother-and-his-older-brother relationship.

Regarding ML's transformation, check the spoiler below. Warning!! (Or not)

I'm very much looking forward to seeing ML grow up and become a man. So far, there's still no indication of ML's transformation, even after reading the latest chapter (93).

I love their team-building process, starting with just MC and ML, and then adding six more people, each with their own powers and characteristics. Each member joins the team through different encounters with MC, where MC helps them. As a result, all of them admire and obey MC. It's beautiful!

I can't seem to stop helping. The plot is fantastic, and I adore every character. It's just sad that everyone is separating! I hope they reunite at the end. And did I mention how nervous and worried I am for Mr. Gu?

Sometimes I forget this is an apocalyptic novel because I get too engrossed in the food porn. Still, I love every thrilling scene! It keeps me on the edge of my seat all the time. Often, you worry because it's so hard to tell if a character will survive a zombie attack, making your heart race faster and faster. Then you hit the next chapter button, and another, and another, until you find yourself unable to stop reading!

I love both the main character and the love interest so much. The romance between them is just right—still a slow burn at this point (I’m currently at chapter 80), but not too fast, and I appreciate that. My dear love interest, you've got to stop playing the son card too well, or you might get son-zoned at the end.

Definitely kudos to the translating and editing team! I understand the challenges and the time it takes, and I truly appreciate their effort. Despite the high level of writing by the author, the translation is clear and enjoyable. Thank you so much!

Note: This is just my initial reaction. I plan to come back later, either when the story finishes or when I decide to machine-translate it myself, to give a proper review.

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Well, what I like the most is the story, how every event proceeds at a moderate pace but still moves quickly, and everything is detailed enough. I love the main character, who is a bit of a typical "iceberg" type of beautiful/handsome person. However, he’s neither too cold nor too emotional, achieving a perfect balance of sweetness and rationality. I especially appreciate his gentle kindness, which doesn’t allow others to take advantage of him. SOOO I LOVE THIS.

Edit: After reading the machine translations and (obviously) overlooking the grammar and writing, I came to the conclusion that I overestimated the plot due to inexperience. It started quite well (decent, let's say) with a cool and beautiful but still very manly protagonist. Then it just became a typical BL story with a pretty uke and an overpowered gong, filled with useless and illogical decisions and events. The author probably thought their relationship was developing too slowly and started rushing things, creating more chaos and mess, while forgetting the struggle and drama that an apocalyptic background should have.

So, yeah, let’s not waste any more time.

So far, so good. In some novels, the main character (MC) with space abilities takes all the food and items. However, in this one, the MC still has a conscience and only took one-third of the perishable food, leaving all the high-calorie food for others.

When I first picked up the novel, I thought, "Ooh, the quality of the translation is going to drop," but after reading the released chapters, the quality is still well-maintained.

Good job, Foxaholic! 🦊

I apologize if I came across as rude, but do you notice how side characters in Chinese novels can be quite shameless? They call it "hugging the thigh" of someone powerful, but it essentially means they're leeching off others. In this novel, the main character is supporting them, yet they don't seem the least bit embarrassed. Instead, they order food as if they're dining out. If I were staying with relatives, I'd try my best not to inconvenience them. Is this a cultural difference I'm missing? Could you recommend some novels where side characters contribute equally instead of relying on others so heavily?