crazy cousins

The story is beautifully written. As an aspiring author, your skills in writing inspire me. I'm looking forward to seeing how the God duo will achieve their dream. 🙂

Absolute cinema.Awespec is the king of slow-burn, but this one is still engaging and moving at a decent pace. See you all in 2000 chapters.

It's confusing as to why this book doesn't have many readers. The main character and her dynamics with the other characters are beautifully written. The writing style is amazing as well! It's easy to understand and along the story, things get explained.  For readers that like reverse harem and character building, give this book a try! You will not regret it!

A solid 4. The writing is excellent. It’s too fluffy for me. The chapters are too short with little to no progress in each chapter. I think I read 10-20 chapters of them running initially. the best chapter is the first one. After that my hopes were dashed. The MC is weak, and is a Book bag for the ML literally she rides around on his back asking questions. I don’t see any value in her apocalyptic story so far. She’s cannon fodder that is JUST that. I haven’t even smelled a redeemtion for her. The monsters being unkillable (immortal) is too much. Grrrrr, creek, crash, chase blah blah blah. Shooting bullets for what reason it can’t die. And the MC is a weak link even getting bit by a rabbit. The story gets your hopes up to lead you no where. With lots of heart pumping and subtle flirting between the leads. For what?? He picked up a chick and has literally had to carry her the whole time. It’s not attractive whatsoever and the MC isn’t someone I admire. That’s what makes a good fantasy novel. Admiring the MC and being satisfied with their actions. Everything this chick has done so far have been down right silly and without the authors excellent penmanship I wouldn’t have made it past the first 20 chapters. Dear author I’d love to see your take on a generic trope. Your banter and world building is top tier. A strong but delicate female who’s quick on her feet beautiful resourceful and admirable. The male lead should actually need her or benefit from her being around other than for food. And some enemy that can be killed lol Rant over!

If I see this demon shadow again, I'll make another chapter for it.

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"yank kamu tunggu sebentar di sini ya"

[xiao hongyi became the fourth human to kill a level 1 iron viper, reward given one rare job token (iron master)]