Coast of Truth: The Evil Beyond Lies

Author here,If you are interested in checking out this mediocre (probably not even that) book and haven’t read the description, here are a few things to note so you don’t waste your time here:+ No solid schedule (I try my best to write but it’s more like a temporary hobby and it can get quite busy in my personal life)+ Bad pacings and plots holes can be attributed to the above as well as my lacking writing ability+ It can get quite confusing at times + This is a rewrite, but it’s much different from its previous version now+ Author’s note is just some personal thoughts on top of my head at that time, so skipping that is fine. + Not a proficient English userIf you do have questions after reading (and criticisms) you can comment below this post and I’ll answer to the best of my abilities.

this is becoming more interesting the more I read

So far up until chapter 70+ while he is starting in the academy the story seems interesting. The concept is quite good yet I have a few concerns.The fact that this was reincarnation after being regarded as a "Grandmaster scholar" of some sort you would think that he should have the knowledge needed to exceed every one. The fact that he became like that before reincarnation should entail that he should have at least the ability to increase his white core among other things. Frankly, his having the knowledge of the past even as a "Grandmaster scholar" shows no particular big advantage to him and to the story. With his knowledge of the past he should have exceeded every kid in the academy but it was basically not the case in the story. I see no point of him being that "grandmaster scholar" in his previous life since the story would be no different if he was a simple scholar. Another one is the pattern of the story. To be honest, it was quite predictable. Its full of a sort of down path (the challenges for the MC) when in a good story it goes like rise before going down. In here, he basically experience continous challenges that seems too annoying since the world doesnt work that way no matter how fictional it may be there will always be a "good or awesome even or encounter" so to speak.

<p>Byron remained silent, keeping his thoughts to himself.</p>

And all that glitters is gold

Walking on the foot park beside the playground for kids, Leo took a bite of his snack in his hand. He saw a little black kitten in a cardboard box, it looked like someone had left it because they can't afford to raise it.

Probably the wind.

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