Celestial Moon Wolf

-Love the book so far-good progression-decent characters PERSONAL ONES⬇️-wish the mc could be stronger -would be neat if mc would focus on buisness-love the subordinates -i think the little love thing is going on tm-cute kid but tbh i always think of them as a liability-[In total I love the story][keap at it]

I was a fan of the old novel as well. And I read this novel till chapter 201 so far and really liked it as it is a big improvement. This novel isn't perfect but I really liked it. Firstly, the writing quality is top notch. No spelling mistakes, no grammatical mistakes and I personally like it a lot. This blends into combat scenes that are also written very well. It isn't anything revolutionary but the battle scenes are amazing.Secondly, character design. The character design is realistic, though of course slightly fantastical, and just super well done. I did think that some of the girls didn't make much sense to fall for the MC, but after reading more I trust that the author will tie it all in very well.Thirdly, the world background is very interesting and there is a lot of stuff and lore to explore. It is just a very immersive and interesting world I want to read more about.Finally, really good update stability.Now, one of the things I did not like as much about the novel was that the pace was a bit off. It slowed down quite a lot compared to the previous novel which I thought was nice, but at the same time, it felt fast. Just not a big fan of the pacing imo, but everything else is well done.Minor spoilers below:Finally, an MC that isn't an edgelord killing people for fun or having no emotions. This new MC is a breath of fresh air in this platform that I really love. Not only that, he is a very smart MC who is capable of playing high level mind games that I enjoy. I think that the thing author does with hiding MC's thoughts can be annoying, especially when it came to one of the female lead's, cause its hard to understand the MC's true thoughts, but I still loved it. The MC in this novel is a big upgrade.Overall rating: around 8.5-9/10 so far in my opinion. I don't read much on this platform but I loved reading this novel.

Dude after 150 chapter the author just changed his writing style. Its fees like I am reading some ancient text or something. Like how should I say this, it's like this line here ' The Null Estate loomed ahead, an indomitable fortress of heritage and might, carved into the heart of the rugged valley' Its presence exuded an aura of silent authority, an ancient testament to the power and lineage that guarded it, standing steadfast as if to shield against the encroaching shadows cast by recent upheavals.The estate's entrance unfurled like the maw of a slumbering giant.' I mean you could have just said the' null estate' that it feels like he is trying to fill the chapters with unnecessary words to expand them.

Tony sat down at the stool in front of the tractor, sighing as he heard Fury say he was in the barn from outside. Laura stood in the doorway, her hands folded over her pregnant stomach as she waited as well. Picking up a nearby wrench, the man tinkered with the motor with no real intension to fix it.

And we could all use a little change

43. Cerita Humor Lucu Ngakak: Tragedi Pengantin Baru

"The border?" he repeated.

Ayahkupun hanya terdiam sejenak dan menatap wajahku, sebelum ia menjawah pertanyaan ku. "perempuan ini adalah perempuan yang akan menggantikan ibu, dia calon istri ayah. Ayah akan segera menikah dengan dia, dan ayah nya perempuan ini juga merupakan rekan bisnis ayah, perempuan ini perempuan baik dan berasal dari keluarga yang baik. Walaupun perempuan ini hanya terpaut 6 tahun dari kakak mu, tapi perempuan ini layak menurut ayah untuk menggantikan ibu dan memiliki sisi seorang ibu. Ayah tidak sedang meminta izin, ayah hanya memberitahu kalian, agar kalian tidak kaget nantinya."