BRIGHTFALL

Hey guys 👋 Author here again! This will be the Q&A thread. Feel free to ask any questions, share corrections, or offer constructive criticism about my book here.I’d really appreciate your feedback.

So it’s obviously me writing my own review, but I just wanted to talk about the stuff I wrote a bit in a place that wasn’t just the end of chapter comments. I am writing this, because I love reading fantasy manga and light novels. I create video games as a hobby, and as a part of my hobby became my job, I guess I needed something else, and this is just a way that I can try and be creative and learn something new. I gave it 5 stars because I am trying my best, and honestly I don’t cringe when I read my own chapters (totally thought I would, but I actually like my characters) if you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave comments on the chapters to help me learn more about what is actually good writing, and what is just something really lame, anyway… hope you enjoy it!

I initially tried reading, but I didn't expect each chapter to be interesting. This is highly recommended, keep it up, Author!

Pretty good start. Loving the unique design of the world. Characters feels pretty real and can relate to them. Story is pretty straight to the point, no BS or anything like that. Need more!!! Hurry up and publish lmao

Thanks for the good story, i really love the creative concept behind it but your writing quality does not do justice to this good novel, sometimes you misplaced the genders of the characters and the story development and world background is lacking, if you could describe both worlds backgrounds it would be really helpful, please keep up the good work even if you don't improve I'll still continue to read.

"Assistan!" the doctor shouted.

theirs the green lantern aka hal Jordan oam the guardians?

"Tangkap dia!" seru Vaqsyi. Kemudian seluruh pengawal istana Vaqsyi berdatangan di luar dan menangkap Thawab Fiyyin. Vaqsyi tersenyum sinis setelah membuka pintu kamar miliknya dan menatap Thawab Fiyyin bersama senyum sinisnya.