Bibliomancers: The Undying Nun and The Big Black Wolf

The story is alright, but there are a few things that caused the lower score.  First, the inconsistencies with Character names.  There have been several times where the Name Melissa takes over a character like a virus, and it's rather irritating when it happens.Next is the strangely disjointed feeling timeline.  There are several instances where it seems that only hours have passed yet at the same time feels like weeks have.  It can be hard to keep track of exactly how long has passed.Third issue I would point out is how Shallow character interaction and relationships appear to be.  Some characters play a role and then seemingly vanish never to be heard from again.  Overall, it's an OK read so far but it's not a story I can rate highly.  Good concept, ok execution.  There just isn't enough refinement, consistency, or depth to rate it higher.

Pretty interesting so far, I curious to see what other ways there are the get stronger. I excited about the progression with other characters as well, maybe a bit more use of his magic to increase his rate of physical improvement.

la historia es fabulosa me encanta 💖 😍 💕  espero más cap

I need more new chapters author-san! I looove the book and story!!

"Here we are, the purify room," said Nurseman, i mean Nurse person.

Neha: 'I'm not going to.'😡

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder