Against The Ropes

This story has a lot of potential, hope mc aspires to gain power and immortality

Keep it up author it has Potential and it’s pretty rare for an author to write a story about center backs.

shameless self-review. read it!                                                                                                                                                                                             

I think it’s a great book that need little to no major corrections but maybe introducing a new side-character that has some unique connection to Master Magi. One minor thing that I think you could add is his Dragon Horned Rhino evolves into a ‘purer’ form of a dragon and gains some special ability only for earth dragons. The last thing you should keep doing is adding the snotty rich kid type that get always seems to get whooped in the end. Its been great reading this book and I hope you add a second part.

-Food: 5 points.

Faros!

"F*ck!" Jhin's face turned dark as he punched the wooden wall of the ship that it immediately broke leaving a hole with the size of his fist.

"Oh no ma'am I've already done eating breakfast" i said