A Viking's Catch (Book One of the Sogn Series)

Hey everyone! It’s the Shameless author here, and I’m giving myself a little 5-star rating for this novel.😊 Writing this novel has been such an exciting experience so far, and I’m thrilled to be able to share it with all of you! But don’t worry—I’m not just here to brag. I’d love to hear your thoughts! Did you enjoy the chapter? What stood out to you? What didn’t quite work? Your feedback is so important to me and helps me grow as a writer. Thanks so much for joining me on this adventure.

The writing could be improved a bit, in terms of like the spelling mistakes i have seen(i could only remember 1 rn; in chapter 3 or 4 idk) and the asymptomatic writing which drives the reading into deep complexities is good but overdone, or should i say, its noticeable (and it kinda shouldn’t be, it should be more natural); and the genre of the complex wording you use is also repetitive, i felt. The 5th chapter made me feel it for sure; i really loved it, that’s what i would say your biggest strength is, try to implement the same highs and lows in your other chapters in a more holistic manner, sometimes it can be done by giving hints or a little bit of anxiety at play; or should i say, make the people remember your chapters distinctively. As so they can easily narrate what happens in which chapter and so on; rn i can only talk about the first 2 and the 5 th(with excitement and with a distinctive feel about these chapters) out of my mind without rereading it.Anyway, huge respect for you my G👊.I wanted to be as harsh of a critic as i could be, because i saw you asking for some criticism and in general i don’t like the Indian influence in my reading but this novel takes the inspiration from the mythological aspects really well (in such a way that doesn’t really make me cringe) so thats something to look up to.

A captivating novel filled with twists and turns. The protagonist’s transformation from disadvantage to dominance is executed brilliantly. The author’s writing style is engaging, making it impossible to put down. A fantastic read for anyone who loves cyber-thrillers!

I am writing this review so that everyone can review it so that we can identify mistakes and improve it for better reading experiences

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This Mc is too liberal with information, giving away all his secrets for no gain at all. Not only that but I still haven’t forgotten that mess from last chapter where he gave two powerful abilities to Jasmine for no reason at all. Wanting to see what that goddess that betrayed Jasmines brother wasn’t reason enough. You should also make it so that any abilities he gives to others through the system doesn’t work on him. There’s no reason why he should of been frozen in time last chapter by a power he himself gave to Jasmine. He should also used the powers to he buys for others, might as well make the most of it after wasting the point to buy the powers.

"Oh no! no need to apologize! Richard and Derek both have been quite helpful with the move in today. Also, I got to meet a few of the brothers as well, so I feel quite welcomed" I say honestly. In reality, even though I don't want to admit it, I feel quite patronized with meeting so many people, especially when all those people are just men.