A New Life as a Villain

As expected you did a great novel hun. Update more chapters and don't leave us hanging. The chapters made me cringe and I wanna see how she slapped her scumbag husband and bitch twin sister!

I really liked the first few chapters. Coz it looked true and not all rainbows and roses.. But it felt awkward when Riot started having feelings for her.. Could have done with a brother like figure.. I don't know how to feel about Gabriel's interaction with her father.. Though it seems straightforward, he is not aware of all the facts but is disrespectful.. Lastly I'm not fond of the leads torturing each other .. Especially not misunderstandings about Gabriel and Evelyn. Hopefully the locked chapters don't have much angst.

I will be real, getting here I came with no expectations in mind but The First 3 Chap had me in a Necklock, bed-shooking position. I already Love Cyrus’s character, The world Building is Fresh (I mean the idea) we haven’t had this type of novels in a while around here. The execution so far is Chef Kiss. I can sense The Author’s taste being tinged by other Novels like SS, LOTM, TBATE , etc, which adds a rich and Refreshing feel to the story and the way it was executed. So far soo good and it has mad potential, I wish all the best for the Author.S/N: THE COMMUNITY DEMANDS A DISCORD SERVER FOR INTERACTIONS WITH THE AUTHOR. (The Link in the T app has expired quite a while ago now, although I think you have already taken it down.)

Can’t wait for more characters ! Lone Cherry 🍒 Baby !!!!

man author, even with the obvious flaws and mix emotions moments continuesly to show on early to mid chapters i still enjoy it. but the sudden change of mind of tang and you making him soft realy break his real character. i think you want this as his character development but man I didn't suit him at all. I didn't even suit the atmosphere of this novel. he should be domineering and ruthless to his enemy not the otherway around. such a disappointment. imight drop this soon it was a great ride man but the early thousands chap development 'its a mehhh for me.

<<Generating>>

Ren felt unknown comfort well up in his heart. He hadn't felt such feeling after his grandpa passed away. It made him a little melancholic...

Yuuichi is still holding Rain and he knows, if he did something.. anything... this probably won't even happen.. But he didn't.