UNDYING FLAME

The story is really interesting. Please continue to update.

After reading 50 chapters I can confidently say that this is in the top 0.001% Of web novels, I am genuinely shocked that this isn’t in the rankings, all the main characters until now have great character writing- the world building is the weakest part of the novel though I’m sure the author will expand more on this aspect. I can’t believe how much of a hidden gem this is and if this is truly authors first Webnovel then I’m shocked at how great of a storyteller he is. I believe this has potential to be one of the greats, I am a bit worried that there wouldn’t be an overarching plot for the novel, I can’t imagine how difficult it would be to come up with a satisfying ending for the novel though I have faith in you Mszrswrite. Also, I wouldn’t have imagined that you aren’t a native English speaker if I haven’t seen one of your comments on the chapter, you’re actually doing such an amazing job on this.Lastly, you really should put a paywall at a specific chapter. You deserve payment for your work, I would imagine locking at *SPOILER* Lucius’s death would be a good place though I’m not an author so take it with a grain of salt.Author is cooking us a 5 star meal

this is so intriguing  definitely adding to my library

Pretty good.                           

Suddenly Zephyrus felt a small desolated feeling, like a very cold breeze, and he stood up and warily looked around. Finding nothing out of the ordinary he sat again in the small corner he claimed as his, despite the baby-like appearance his eyes scanned everyone he saw as if judging whether to trust them or not.

He lowered his head so his face is at level with Atlantis' face. "What did I tell you I would do if I hear you say "Sir" again?

"I don't care how you guys can get this far, but the battle against Tiger Raiders was just a small amount of troubles awaiting you on the road to Eastern Continent. Savage hunters, powerful and dangerous beasts, bandits, and warring nations. Those are what you're going to deal later."

"Rhoan, Darkline has eaten well today. Don't over feed him tonight, I don't want him getting fat" Avery ordered.