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Your novel presents a captivating and dark world filled with twisted, psychological horror. The setting of Skull Island of the Devil is chilling, with its detailed descriptions of sadistic tortures and the despair that envelops the prisoners. The gruesome imagery is unsettling, but it creates a haunting atmosphere that pulls the reader into this brutal reality. The characters, especially Eva and Mason, stand out with their rebellious and fiery personalities, adding tension to the already grim environment. The plot moves at a thrilling pace, keeping the suspense high, and the unexpected twists, like the lava substitute and Mason's hidden plans, add depth and complexity to the story. The unique blend of horror, action, and dark fantasy promises an engaging experience for fans of psychological terror. It’s a bold narrative with rich world-building and intense character dynamics.

As someone who is reading ahead on patreon, the story is alright. It's not a masterpiece but it doesn't need to be. It's a fun read with good characters. The MC is a mysterious guy with unknown past maybe we'll learn about it in the future. Most of all this story has a Fatty. We all know that stories with Fat side characters are generally good. What I appreciate the most about this story is the humor. It hits you out of nowhere but it hits like a truck, not forced or unnatural at all...

Author here, its my first time writing a game novel. So i hope you let me know how you find it and if any improvements can be made. The novel will be focused on the Aramageddon and on reality. It won’ be fixed only on the game, reality will also have crucial and significant impact on the Mc’s life. The novel will also have romance, and some sort of slice of life into it. The mc is just 14 years old whilst his sister is 15, so don’t expect him to do everything perfectly although he isnt dumb and will mostly pick the right decision. The mc is op, but the pacing will be slow to medium, do let me know if you like it or hate it. Ask any questions here, and thank you for reading this far.

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If you ask what bad writing means I would show you this novel's plot. Seriously, looking for just a thing that have sense is harder than find a unicorn's horn.

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