Reincarnated as Slaanesh in Marvel

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The book is well-written. It's very detailed which makes it easier to imagine what the place in the story looks like and what is happening with the main character. It might be a little bit slow-paced but it's quite acceptable since the story is just starting. Upload more chapters and keep writing.

I let out a sigh, " As I said, I'm a modified Human but not through Experimentation...it's complicated to explain. All I'll say is that I'm barely Human while everything else is something both familiar and unfamiliar to this world~" I smirked at the troubled expression on Sirzechs troubled face, "Well, just watch me, you'll probably find out what I am when I hit puberty. Anyway, I've got a 'date' so I'll have to leave now...Irina! Come on, we've still gotta go to the park!" I walked over to Irina before pulling her away from the Maou she was arguing with.

"This commoner noticed by your armor and the familiar face of the old duke who this commoner once had seen when I traveled before to the capital."

Tian Meng allowed herself to show a small smile as she thanked Yan madame and Yan Mo for their praises. "I'll let you two talk, there's no need to continue humoring this old lady," Yan madame said, graciously shooing them away before turning to greet other guests.

"Carla-"

Wow! This story is really something. The amount of detail put into the prologue and the description of the fire abilities are really immersive. I'm so excited to read what happens during the fight.

I have been bamboozled! This is a harem but without a harem tag! Be warned my fellow daoist who are not controlled by their big brother, this is a sham! P.S Grammar is sickening and plot is eh