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Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

Never seen something like this before. Super dark, but I like it......................................................................................

Apakah dia sudah tahu tentang mereka?

[Power Wings]

Arcane - Time : 0

Sapphire Octahedron representing the ice and space.

The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure.The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels.As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.

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