Chaos Wave

The first chapter set up the tone pretty well, it was pretty serious and the mc isn't foiling around, he reminds me a bit of Gilgamesh from fate.The writing is also pretty neat and the use of fancier words have been used here and there, so far have potential and I cant wait to see more.

This story is nice you got me hooked from the beginning.  Am so impressed.  I have being looking for this kind of story since I started webnovel. You have made my dream come true. Please continue the story. 💘 😻 💜 💛

Finally, the playwrights worked hard, according to the narrator behind the curtain, to come up with this story, and finding a special Valentine's Day episode wasn’t easy-it was such a vast theme to explore.  Anyway, False Smile, you are an author, thank you for writing this work! I think another task will be assigned to me soon.  Please read Look Left ← Like Now!

So yeah. Pretty bad review. First point is, although the "child nanny become the wife and mother" is common, the idea on an imperial nanny is good. So at first I was quite happy. An ancient China where there could be an imperial nanny  ? Sounds interesting. But it is a modern world with an imperial family ? Wtf.Now an enthusiastic FL that want to take care of children, good, uncommon. Talented as a detective, well every FL need a cheat, so it's OK. But damn her personality is horrible. She meet the first 'enemy', and insult her and slap her directly. She is barely better than a low class bitchy villainess. I mean, respect to a stranger, even if they are rude, is basic etiquette and courtesy !Now, ML is a jerk. He never met his son, for 5 years ! Because the boy remind him of the mother ! He is basically saying : "booohooohoooo, the love of my life is dead, I don't want to be reminder if heeerr". If I could, I would slap him and yell at him to get himself together. He is an *****, an emperor, and a father. He has no excuse to say in the past. He has responsabilités and should uphold them. Also, he is a pathetic mess of misery and self pity. I know, novel world, à placé where  life shattering live exist, but smh, one of the most important human, abilities is to forget.And lastly, this world. OK, à royal family still in power is a modern world, can pass, good enough. But a harem? Seriously? In which non Islamic country is a harem even socially acceptible? Which lead us to another problem. There is basically no social structure. I tried, but can't see one.Oh, and lastly, it isn't that well written. Author has been lazy by directly writing the name of the speaker, and the place the action take place. Most of the writings are dialogues. It look like a manga script. If you read this, author, those infos (speaker name, character background and else) should be either integrated in the text like : "okay

I like it very much such wonderful works trully deserve it

Where are all the reviews?            

unique name I never saw this name before. strong plot. Totally different story no doubt. your all stories are going very well my dear Liz. Best of luck.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older