A D-rank Adventurer's Bizzare Reincarnation

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

When The Character Resembles Christina Yang From Grey's Anatomy 😂😂😂😂

"Exactly, but remember the rules, we can't make humans who have the power of magic." Dark swinging his finger.

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Min" Umm.. Leia where is our other member of this team? And where is our team leader?" He wasn't sure if she was really is his team member so he asked this question to her.

The distance of his family's home with a gate outside the world is not far away, just an hour's ride on a taxi. This is because as a preparatory when an emergency or an attack from outside the world takes place, the grandpa does not take long to get to the aid gates.

He blankly picks up the dropped wooden club and swings it at the head of another goblin, which pops like a watermelon. He could faintly hear a beeping sound in his head, but he couldn't hear it clearly.

I look back at the youth as I see him trembling without backing away. I took one step closer as he finally takes a step back. I unfold my arms and place it infront of the ground as I prepare myself to jump, the youth still trembling finally makes a charge at me.