Good story. Terrible fight scene writing. subpar overall writing. characters and world can use more depth, the power level of the empire or kingdom can be a starter. Shed some light onto his goals cause your Mc just reacted passively through the 14 chapters I read through. please develop the power scaling better, what tier was the monster he first faced, what can kill him blablabla. Think for a while then continue. Better yet just take some time polishing what you've already written. if you're first language isn't English then have a friend edit for you. Good luck.
I have a love/ hate relationship towards this author because they make some of the best novels, 2 in which I absolutely LOVED and were my favs on this app,but then he drops them and this really is annoying and sad. I'm also liking this one quite a bit but I don't even want to get attached to if he's gonna drop it also. Author knows how to write REAL villains and I love that but Please continue your work and stop leaving us disappointed again and again😞. Anyways really looking forward to what this one has to offer and so far it's really good 👍 ☺️
I like the worldbuilding and the story is nice. Keep it up! There are a few grammatical errors so I suggest using some grammar corrector, and don't put a space before the period. But overall, this is a good read.
Well… this was a good read. I don’t mostly read sci fi genre but the synopsis really drew me in.So far, I only read few chapters. I really like Sean’s character. The detailing were perfect but please just look out for capitalisation. It’s minor error. You can edit it later.Overall. Very recommended.
I absolutely adore what is here so far. So I decided to post this review in hopes the author can update faster. While I'm not sure if this deserves 5 full stars I’m sure it’s close. So I’m willing to scrape up the extra points. The world building I feel like is the only somewhat lacking part of the novel. With that being said, there’s only a few chapters here so far. I’m willing to bet by chapter 5 that will cease to be the case.Now I’ll point out the parts I love. The writing style is absolutely amazing in this novel but I recognize it might not suit everyone’s taste.It’s very descriptive but the descriptions are short and to the point. Plentiful, but concise. It’s also amazing at building an environment, yet some people prefer more attention to immediate action or dialogue. I can say those points are not lacking. The dialogue has never felt flat to me, although the god could have been given a bit more care, everything else is perfect. It’s never generic, and the characters also stay consistent while still being given depth. I believe as long as this style is kept and is not changed due to negativity, and the story stays unique and immersive. This can hit top 10. I have faith
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