five out of five simply for having the shortest first chapter and somehow still managing to make a serious story lol.Okay but for real. I'd actually give this like a 3 or maybe a low 4. It is a kind of funny story. It uses dark horse styles of comedy with people mostly making short quick replies so if you don't like that you probroaly wont find this story funny. As for action. it has its moments. I feel like they could be a lot better but it gets the point across. The story is kind of cool. You got monsters and superpowers. It is really slow though. I was expecting this to be like a few chapters of world building but we're still only at chapter 20 and are still be givin questions. Some stuff still hasn't been explained and others are slowly being unraveled.The powers are kind of cool. They take normal concepts and alter them kind of. Like you got your base fire power and this mad man said screw it and turned it into a fox. I like Chinese lore and mythology. All in all this is an okayish story. I have fun reading it but then again I've never given any rank lower than a 3 so don't trust me.
Writing quality - 3 starsNo obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary (also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying) Update stability - 3 starsI'm neutralStory development - 3 starsThe pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)Character design - 2 starsCharacters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)World background - 2 starRarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity (there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting) It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obviousGood to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...
A good beginning but the writing is a little stilted because of translation and there is very little character development of the MC or supporting characters.
Author please...please..please continue this novel..i really like it..why did you stop?..you said its not your style but i can tell you that the chapters are really great..so you can do it..i like the way how you wrote..the characters behaviour..everyrhing so far is good..Please please please please continue and finish this novel
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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