Wolf Pup

One of my favorite novels here and it hurts to see the price per chapter.*sighs* Wait time for my new Exploooosion Magic.O crucible which melts my soul, scream forth from the depths of the abyss and engulf my enemies in a crimson wave!Pierce trough, the black clouds of Heaven and Earth!EXPLOSION!

Typical WuxiaBut formatting makes it completely unreadable for cultured people like myself. No paragraph structuring at all, just barbaric.Anyways MC wakes up in a dudes body and gains a system that tells him the success rates of things, like his chances of breaking through, or fucking someone.Typical, typical, typical.Anyways, he instantly finds some OP scripture that only he could cultivate because the system told him that he could, and coincidentally he becomes the student/lover of a lady that was searching for someone that could cultivate that scripture (wow shock)Nothing impressive, the formatting makes me nauseous

The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why

"Maids!

TREELET SHIELD - UNLOCKED

"Interesting, Very interesting" a sudden sound surprised me as I retracted my spikes, letting the dagger go.

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"Do you have any new information about this world? Like why did Destiny turn, wasn't she supposed to turn in two days?" I scowled. "And now I want to know, what the hell are you and why should I not remove you from my body right here and now?"