White Fox Jade

Don’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad badDon’t like the mc and main girl as they are very fake and face slapping bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad bad

Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points.SPOILERS AHEAD***************************Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about.Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said.Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough.Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed.World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end.OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.

First of all, lessen the harem parts and more on the cooking parts. I just started to read and the story 30+ below are quite good, better keep that up.

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For a novel that's about kingdom building and a genius MC, the plots are terrible and shallow. The brilliance of the MC is only achieved because everyone is dumb and incompetent. Conflicts are forced or inconsequential, sometimes both. Some of the issues and resolution don't even make sense. Overall a poor attempt at writing a smart MC helping a king develop his kingdom.

Hello, author here! I hope the readers enjoy this completed story of mine! It took a couple of months to finish it and with issues of writer's block with my other stories, I was able to finally complete this story in 2 Volumes, which was my goal for this novel! I hope everyone enjoys the main characters and the plot of the story!

I love poems so much, and this one in particular is worded so well, it takes me back to my high schools days, when I’d borrow random books from the library and forget to return them back.