White Collar: Shadows of Caffrey

I read the beginning of this story on wattpad. For now the plot and characters are interesting . Good story so far and i advice u to go reading it .

Dont waste your time on this, though it starts interesting the character development is as bad as it can be. You expct that around 500 chapters with be enough to develop a character, but except the little development regarding the power of the characters, their personality hasnt changed at all and it gets annoying.

i read till 250 chapter sofirst if u are looking for a beast Taming novel were mc goes on adventures and have beast fights then u r would be greatly disappointed what u would find here in this novel is what you see in urban novels -fightingthis novel is all about  mc basically making connections with people at one lvl then on another and so on while enhancing his beasts then repeat this novel very bland after a 100 or chapters and becomes boring so for people who like normal beast Taming novels this definitely a let downbut this not the worst novel of beast Taming novels but a quite a different take on it just the author forgot the basic charm of the Beast Taming theme in his goal of making a different onei hope it made some  sense

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first of all, the writer doesn't know how to do math or something cause every single number is incorrect, either the writer is lazy or didn't even finish grade 3 since it's fricking easy math.second of all, the writer didn't even mention the character descriptions except the fact she has these big sacs on her chest and curvy body and her hair, not even describing how the face looks.also a lot of grammatical mistakes which could be ignored but still and I Think the writer just doesn't want to complete the words, like for example the word t-shirt got spelled "tee" like dude, what?third of all there is no word background description, or at least not enough, the writer is even so bored he doesn't even want to describe the entrance to the castle, like where are the rooms, what is in there exactly, he just mentions there is a room with a bed and closet at least from chapter 15 and before.

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