Where Shadows Walk

There has never been a book that has induced so much anger into me. The writing and characters are ok, I just don't really like where the plot is going. There are a few holes/places where it was forced. Overall pretty good, but it just doesn't strike the right note with me, other people may like it and I respect that, but I don't.

This is a story about protagonist who hates and despise capitalism when other people use it to pressure him but later he become the monster he hates himself and he also using capitalism to pressure other people he doesn't like in return,

Raws please!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Its a great story but sadly either the translator doesnt understand english very well or just doesnt care because the translation is not only trash it is super trash .

Started off really well the idea of reincarnation with knowledge of a game that transpired to be the biggest online community that has many ways of making real money from exchanging in game currency in which many actual companies get involved in.As you progress through the story you’ll get very excited to see our MC power up and it’s almost addictive! Until however it gets to the point where it’s now boring and very much so repetitive! The dungeons become plain and the MC loses what you thought was his character and becomes this sexual deviant who gets constantly pushed around by women! Which from the start is a complete 180 degree turn of his original character or so you would think. For some ungodly reason the author has lost all reason and decided to forsake morality and sexualise women to the point that it’s ridiculous!! There is a scene where he has *** with his teacher and it was supposedly a big deal ect, I was fine with that scene since it was the first although the translator added a bit more making it a little graphic I liked the rawness of that sexual encounter and I thought that it brought us even closer to the MC but sure enough that’s all it became. I really liked this book I was even a Patreon for 2 months, but I needed canceling my patronage half way through the 2nd month. This book is down right degrading and a 5 year old probably wrote the last 400 chapters (except the R+18 content of course) I’m thankful for the translations and I really wish them the best of luck but if you have any moral value whatsoever I’d steer clear of this one!

There are those complaining that this has SoL elements in this story instead of pure PUBG in the comments, really? Did you not read the story description or some ****?

Pure trash. 30 great Voidwalkers who were legends when they were alive behaving like perverted otakus, disappointing. 15 Chapters in and there is no progress at all

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