This story is not bad, it is far from what I expected. The story is not for me at all. It is interesting for people who like stories like this, and your world building is very good. You have a nice writing style that keeps people in. The problem is the grammar, if you reread through your story, you can easily find them. But the grammar mistakes are small and doesn’t throw off the story. Unfortunately this story is not for me, but for the people is will enjoy the story.
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I'm a fan of this novel already! The reason why I wrote a review is because I want to support the writer. His work is really great, it's been a while since I found a great novel like this. In the story, the male lead is a nice guy as well as their parents. It's a shame that their life is so tough, hope they'll get a better life.
Her body was still weak for she refused him, with the soft voice she asked, she bent down her head and closed her eyes, hoping mercy from the beast which she knew it might useless.
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