Well I just finished reading up to chapter 419, and I decided to make review. The reason for this is due to the fact that many other reviews have simply been misleading and not giving true insight into whether or not you should read this book, so this review will mostly be disproving any of the se accusations.Before this though I want to clarify that this book is not perfect in any sense and it has some bad points but many of these criticisms I've seen have just been blatantly lies.The first thing is that MC doesn't develop store, this is false. As of the latest chapter the whole story has revolved around the store and the only times Mc leaves is for missions generally speaking, throughout the book the store has expanded, gained new functions and offered new services to customers.Secondly that MC is dumb for going to other secret realms as it is dangerous, this is due to the fact that the system forced MC to go there, not only that but dangerous?? It has been explained that other than Beast Kings that the MC would be perfectly and that secret realm had been scouted and it was said that there was no possibility of there being beast kings, meaning that the Mc was perfectly capable on top of that he gets a reward from the system which he needed at the time.All in all the novel is pretty good, definitely recommend reading, it's most negative part is the MC's IQ sometimes, he simply says some stuff that is kinda dumb, not necessarily actions but just words, like he doesn't understand simple thing, this is something which some side characters pointed out to Mc such as Joanna, that was the only thing which was "unsettling to me" as making a MC dumb for no reason is just stupid and makes the reading less enjoyable.On another note the world background and power rankings are explained well and it can be seen that Mc's journey has just practically begun, I especially like that MC has begun to have more and more control on the system and can't be forced to do things unless he wishes.
I love and hate this story. It gave me sometimes big emotional rollercoaster. Just hope that Mc and Luna will end up together. he even went to underworld to get her soul. She was the reason he started to change but she have boyfriend....... And hope that Irene will find her happiness. Idea with adding female version of Mc is great. Just waiting for next chapters to hate and love this story 5/5 have mood destroyed and repaired if you start to read this great story. :)
The writing and story telling of this novel is my first time. I'm not a big interest to this kind of genre or story because I prefer more action and fantasy type.But this novel got me hooked after I read 5 chapters so I think everyone should give it a try
Is it shameful to give your own book 5 stars? What a joke! If I can't like my own book, who else will?Besides that... I'm seeing all the "Don't drop the book" comments, can you guys also see the pressure that writing a story like this has? ;3I'd just like to say that I don't plan on doing so at all. I quite like how things are going and I'd like to make this one of the best light novels out there.But thanks for the support guys, I really appreciate it and the fact that I'm getting so much love despite this being my first book is really welcoming. So I thank you.
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