So far this little story has some attention of mineMost novels only focus on the MC but this one like Overlord, it has deepth and backgrounds for side characters and the world itself I would like to have some suggestions such as adding things that other novels don’t so that it will make your novel stands out and unique Keep it up I will give you 2 stone per day
Ava is so innocent. I'm still wondering why their bestfriend bond broken.What if Liam also had crush on Ava, but thinking that Ava treated him as a friend and he developed feelings, Ava would feel disgusted, So, he hid his feelings and got a girlfriend hiding from her?Anyways, the plot and character design are good showing Ava's incredible journey.Let's see how this journey goes. Keep it Up! Author.
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