Vassal Lord

This novel was so good I created a webnovel account just so I can read more.Anyway slow start but it shows the emotions of what a real person would do and built up from there.Good system not like some where all stats are equal but some worth more than others because it’s true some stats are harder to raise and better than others.Great world building he shows rather than tells which is in my opinion the right way because if the character did not know about something why should we know about it.Cliff hangers well the author knows when it’s good or bad to put them in like he did near the ending of the first ordeal (you will know when you there) but he didn’t just post a chapter he waited a extra day then posted both in one day much better than some authors that don’t care about our feelings :)Character development well all I have to say is it’s the best I’ve seen other except when he got his first kill in the (you will know when you get there) and touched (it) it kind of felt forced so that Jake could become bolder but it was alright.Plot well become stronger so you can become lazy (yeah lazy you will understand if you read the first volume).Grammar well better than most I’ve seen and I’ve seen a lot so don’t worry about grammar messing with the story.Anyway just wanted to leave this review for my favorite author and book I haven’t seen such a good book that I even created a webnovel account just to read it (didn’t even do that for birth of the demonic sword).Well good day folks and jolly ho thank for reading this review.

i like the story, its pace is nice, character feels a bit iffy sometimes but its a very good read. The background plot progression always leaves room for a bit more mystrey and its quite funny and fun to read too

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The book is mostly about adventure in my own opinion, then love companionship, and last but not the least friendship. The thing I mostly like about the book is how it was written. It makes you want to read more about it, and it also gets you excited, and engrossed in it. The book in itself is thrilling from what I have read. The only bad thing about this book can be a few twist and turns which I didn't like, but others my like it. All in all, the book is really interesting and I highly recommend it.

this a utterly super posionus  garbage 🗑️ 1 doesn't follow even the basic logics like every action has a equal and opposite reaction 2 writer is writing a novel everything centred around human body yet doesn't know jacksh it about human body 3 super in consistent like says something in one para yet a para below say the totally opposite 4 everything is just super vague last this not a novelthis  is more the first most draft of a novel where everything is vague  with ton618 size plot holes written as timeline reference for the proper novel this enough to say how trash this isadvice either don't read this trash or shutdown the logical and rational thinking part of your brain before reading or else u might deplete all of your surviving brain cells

The choices the system gives aren't bad, it's the MC that makes terrible choices. He makes choices that always lead fights, face slapping and just really annoying. There is simpler way do it 😪 and this is not it. It's just trash with a self righteous MC that thinks his word is law and anyone who disagrees deserves death 😔

looking forward to this one                                   .............................................................................................

Isn’t this just a novel that died 2 months ago but you have to pay for it                                                              I’m watching you