Valentine.

This story has good potential, not so good grammar but still I can see something for it. Now granted, this story gets more views that power stones or reviews but don't stop writing, I took the time out of my day to review this.

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The first chapter is captivating. I don't really read books like this but this one, listening to it gave a vivid picture of it.Listening to books like this is way better than reading. Good job, author. 🤗

Alright it's about time for a review and dont't mind the shameless 5 star review.  This is a novel about an old man named kael who lived till he was one hundred then died and recarnated into a world similar to earth .the twist is the world he is in gets chosen by the realm of war , fishy right ?well kael recovered his last life memory when he was ten and this happen to be when the realm of war chose his world .now he has to choose one out of three concepts but an "error" occurred and now he wields the three. if you don't understand the prologue this is the summary of that and the first two chapters or so.expect a good world build, a moderate paced novel filled with fight scenecs. romance -maybe or maybe not . harem-no ...R18 - maybe , maybe not .villain mc - you have got to be kidding me. nah he is just straight up demon.smart mc - yes The gods are powerful creatures that can destroy and create life ... kael's goal is to become the god of existence but will he become that or even surpass it????.

"Hello, dear readers! This is my first novel and my debut project as an author. I’d love to hear your thoughts: **What tips would you give to improve this story and make it more engaging?**"  📚📚✒