I can see my flesh building up under my fingernails. Digging it out of my leg like a mole digging its home. Chunks of flesh dangling from the cuts. Some completely detached and laying on the ground in pools of my blood. Scratch. Scratch. Scratch.
In the end, the bluenette still lost against the number one young devil. But no one could say that she hadn't tried her hardest and that was more than enough.
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Since I'm not very skilled in languages, I can't provide a constructive review, but what’s certain is that I enjoyed the story, especially the beginning. It feels like one of those series we see on screen—humor and action are definitely there. As for the flaws to point out, I think your readers have given relevant feedback.
I love how ruthless the MC is! No pointless mercy just pure dominanceThe way the mystery unfolds keeps me on the edge of my seat. This is gold Most stories make the MC struggle, but this one just lets him flex, and I LOVE IT
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