I was going to write sooooooooo much about how terrible and aggravating this novel is and how unrealistic it is which is hilarious cause it’s a fantasy world and for that to be unrealistic you need to mess up REALLY BAD with character development and plot armour and it does so I’ll point some out-mc is too kind(mother was abused and killed, mc is poor in a terrible area, literally no friends and an orphan)-mc thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows(literally the whole novel is just him in denial about how bad humans are LOL like we already experiment on other humans even without being in a fantasy world that literally makes them into lesser humans cause they’re so weak)-mc has flippin dementia(for some reason the mc will forget basic things like for example, the curse world it has three things the mc learns before going in, 1cursed beasts, 2blessed beasts, 3something for a potion that’s very valuable, and what does the mc think when he sees crowds of people trying to harvest this one flower literally putting there lives on the line for it, here’s the paragraph “if prodigies from larger families and clans were asked to pluck flowers, their worth must be enormous...but I can’t think of and extremely expensive potion one can concoct out of bloody flowers” like you flippin idiot there’s only three things and one potion in that list you moron what else could it be a brain supplement cause if it is you need one.Aaaaaaand that’s it for now I still can’t believe how far i got with veins bulging from my forehead in frustration at how annoying this mc is, like on earth it’s a boring realistic planet with the same environment the mc was born into and in some area’s worse and what do we see there are kids that are smarter and more mature then some adults and smarter like street smarts and then in a fantasy world that evolved around killing and enslaving, and his mother that was abused murdered also he was blind had no friends and was as weak as a chicken he thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows that there is no bad in the world and won’t kill anyone, and will openly tell people that I have very op eyes, and that just cause he hasn’t heard anything about it, it just doesn’t exist like transplanting special traits that when the enemy has almost god like power there is for sure a way to transplant traits and you openly tell them about yours because a disabled orphan with no power in the world hasn’t heard about transplanting traits it doesn’t exist and can’t happen
I have a question about the hero's girlfriendWhat memories she has Is she reincarnated Or have memories of the futureIn short, where did her memories come from (I'm not sure but she always reminds herself as a mature but knows nothing about the future)
I do not mind cliches. Almost everything is a cliche in its own way especially in this genre. Unfortunately, this is not my cup of tea. The FL is weak. The ML is horrible. Part of what attracted my attention to this novel was the description that the ML was caring. B.S.The ML has effectively kicked her out of the house, stalked her, forced her into a corner to where no matter how much she cries and demands that she does not like him makes her have a relationship with him, blackmailed her and has put her into a situation to where if she tries to escape he has basically threatened to ruin her life. This is not caring. This is abuse. Nobody deserves that treatment.It does not matter that he never became physical with her. She is abused and abuse can be way more than just physical. She is being verbally, sexually, psychologically, emotionally, and financially abused. Abuse is abuse. Never settle for abuse.
I crouched there for a moment and heard John shifting just a bit. I took a quick glance at him before staring at where the gun is and then suddenly I heard a shout behind the tree. Within a few seconds I seen a mans hand and I aimed with my gun.
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