It's really good, one of the best I've read here. However, there's one aspect of the story that really bugs me, the protagonist often finds himself in situations that would mostly benefit him without any real repercussions. I'm at chapter 1152 and in the past few dozens of chapters, our MC got the sword saint inheritance and a divine beast of the darkness attribute which, in the mortal lands, only he could make full use of. Don't let me get started with the number of inheritance ground he's been in, it's is ridiculous and even if he happens to arrive late in all of them, he still got the most out of it. I guess my issue here is how stakes are almost nonexistent, moments in the story that was supposed to impede his growth ends up helping him in the long run. This makes a lot of the encounters lackluster. I would still recommend it though.
This is a truly well written book in the historical category. Although, it may seem pretty slow as the mc is still a toddler after 15 chapters, it hasn't bored me to the point that I may drop it. I am willing to wait and see how he saves Austria from its impending doom. My only tip to the author would be to speed up a little in terms of story progression
Esta muyyyyýyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bueno me encantaría seguir leyendo esta historia muy bien elaborada. Bueno llegando a este punto espero que cuando comineze la historia principal no se tan rápida sino que incluya más detalles.
Wow... Iam a number one fans of tranmigration novel with this kind of storyline, well from my perspektif the perfect tranmigration novel is the one that will make mc goes aroun other world not just one or two maybe eleven or more.There many story that adopt this kind of storyline where mc goes aroun the universe but the one that I really love isnt that much. So I hope this story not disappointed me.<my native is not english, sorry for typo>
This is trial marriage husband: need to work hard but with vampires. the other one has way more chapters so i assume it came first but 🤷🏾u200d♀️ the plot is incredibly similar and even the first opening statement is exactly the same. maybe i just dont know how things work around here and theres tons of books here with the exact same plot.
To many holes in the writing... there could be improvements, but the jumps are bad, the mc is trash because everything seem to be rushed and random in the story... I read up to 176 chapters and I think I am dropping this... good luck.
Hello, I'm Hongkonger and I'm the author. English is not my first language and difficult to write. There will be mistakes but I will try my best. So, be kind.
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