Universal DOOM : Reborn Of The genius CE0

this book will take you through a roller-coaster effect as you follow the story of the Strongest Guild Master. it has been amazing and will be one that i go back to read multiple times!

I really wish I could give this story 5 stars, I liked it that much. However the problems with it are just too big and really drag the story down.This is a novel that starts well. Being an alchemy story set in the modern world is, for me, a refreshing change of pace.  I really enjoyed this novel for the first half. Story was well developed and the pacing was excellent. Character development was good and story line was interesting.  Now for why I marked the story down.  (Writing quality)..The editing and english quality is so-so, above machine translation but could be improved by a pass through microsoft word.(Story Development)(Spoiler Follows) My complaint is with the novel shift starting at chapter 141. While flashbacks are an excellent method of both plot and character development, they are normally limited to a chapter or two at a time. What happened here is the introduction and deployment of an entirely different plot and supporting characters, with no warning or explanation. This is very distracting to the reader and totally destroys the immersion in the story.

i am in chapter 22 right now and what i can say is that the mc is a man that don't care about using others to reach his goalsbut what i don't like is that when it come to his grandparents he become like a kid who hasn't seen the world like cmonImagine the man who lived millions years and slept with countless beauties to blush with the mere mentioning about a girl in front his grandmotherand he get very emotional with them and that's fine but at least act like your age manAnyway I am only on chapter 22 and so I hope he won't keep acting like a kid with themThat's only my opinion if you don't like it you can ignore it just thought about writing itother than that the story seems interesting and so far i liked it. i will read to the latest chapter soon and i will write another reviewNote : English is not my main language

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"Ahh... how can she be this beautiful? When all she is doing is playing with a cat??!! What is this feeling I get when I see her? Why it seems like she is important to me? Why I feel like my heart is not mine when I see her? Am I falling for her? And if I am... Is she falling for me too? Does she get the same feeling I get?"

That is just one of the too many philosophies her witty mind could muster to give reasons on what she does and why did it in the first place.

"Hurry and check the muggleborn registration book." Fudge said venting his bottled up frustration her.