Understanding freedom - httyd fanfic

This novel is pretty amazing with all the powers and knowledge the mc has and the best of all this novel hasn't been Targeted by spammers 😊

Honest reviews are here..[Spoiler Alert]It is a story about MC who transmigrated into a body that was untalented as a normal person, and then, he got his golden finger, "the system.." This is a typical Wuxia novel where the character here easily offended, the sudden interference of young master who want to kill MC without a reason, and bla bla bla..You would see around Ch.3, MC cultivation iump from 1st major realm into the 8th major realm right away..1. The Physical Body realm (Ch.1)2. The Dragon-Elephant realm3. The Divine Treasure realm4. The Sea of Bitterness realm5. The Wheel of Life realm6. The Dao Palace realm7. The Paramita realm8. The Divine Transformation realm (Ch.3)9. The Heavenly realm (Ch.90+)10. Origin Return realm11. Tribulation Tanscendence realm12. Mahayana realm13. Deva realm14. Myth realm15. Grotto-Heaven realm16. Innate Sky Realm17. Heavenly Cycle realm......[Unverified realm] :??. Great Emperor realm??. Heaven Emperor realm??. True God realm??. True Celestial realm??. Celestial King realm??. Immortal Emperor realmThe author only list out ONCE, and if you don't remember which realm is higher and how high the rank is, you would be confused when reading it.. The cultivation name is quite unique and different from others' wuxia or xianxia type of novel, which makes it harder to remember..When you see MC jump into the 8th major realm right away, you might think this MC has a fast-paced growth progress, but it is not.. MC slowly increases the cultivation level. He rises one minor realm at a time and no longer has a huge jump cultivation rank.. For example, at Ch.100, MC is still at 9th major realm.. Yes, he only increased one major realm after 100 chapters..For the 1st 50 chapters (Ch.4 - Ch.50+), all MC enemy or opponents have lower realms than himself.. Mostly, at 5th or 6th major realm and some are 7th major realm and only a few at 8th major realm, same as MC..After Ch.50, MC goes to a greater world (temporarily) where he can see how weak and low his cultivation is.. Then, after returning back, he started to meet a powerhouse who was a lot stronger than him (13th or 14th major realm)..There is a huge major realm difference between MC and his opponent.. MC is also getting more and more arrogant as the story progresses.. MC talent is really pathetic.. He is at 8th major realm, and he has a friend who is at 9th major realm.. After a few months, MC is still at the 8th major realm (MC only increases one minor realm :early, middle, late, peak, prefection) while his friend is at 11th major realm (increase 2 major realm)..There are many regions in this world, and MC regions are the weakest.. Many MC opponents also have much much much higher realm than him.. And by slowly increasing the minor realm one at the time, kinda make it look boring and is the reason I stopped reading..MC system is quite strong, but he needs to pay the appropriate price to use the system.. If MC gets 300k Fate Point (FP), the system will ask for 250k FP.. If he gets 1 million FP, the system will ask for 1 million FP.. If MC gets 100 million FP, the system will ask for 70 million FP.. So basically, the author would let MC have too much point..I also don't like how the author makes MC behaviour look like.. Sometimes, MC acts like a stupid person.. He only has one plan, and if it fails, that's it.. He can only hope for best.. Then, some people try to sell exorbitantly to MC, which is 100k middle divine stone for a corpse, and he agrees without any care..Sometimes, MC left his enemy running away so his enemy could bring more people for MC to kill (MC wants more corpse).. The things got from sacrifices the corpse is random.. It can be treasure, fate point, years of cultivation, pills, weapons, techniques, skills, and so on.. And mostly, MC gets weapons.. It is very rare that the MC gets anything that will increase his cultivation level..And the story got more and more absurd and ridiculous.. The math does not make sense. The cultivation level does not make sense. The behaviour of this novel character does not make sense, and a lot more.. I stopped reading after reaching around Ch.300++..

gggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd kkkkkeeeeeeppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppp pppp

so far so good easy to read good for an afternoon when you are not sure what to do with the rest of the day...will continue to read when I have time.

So many 5 star reviews, but man this novel is completely makes the MC act more like a demon rather than angel. Not only is this story bland, but this is already on the road of trashy average cultivation novels. The MC is both a demon and Angel but all of his actions make him out as more of a demon and no angel. Rather the MC is a human with evil tendencies since apparently only his demon side speaks out to him while his angel side is no where but dead on the ground.

The premise of the story is good, keep up the good work author! Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression.                                 

The use of first POV made the MC's struggles more relatable to the readers. The world building is done well, and the vivid descriptions made it very thrilling and heart pounding to read. Kudos for updating this very often, too. Keep it up and good luck in the contest! ^^

reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.