ULTIMATE VENTURES SEASON 2

Author-san shameless 5 star review.If you read the novel, please review it too ♥If you are reading it before read the novel, let me tell you a secret. "Normally, 95% from those people who like the novel don't review. 95% from those people who dosen't like the novel, review." Soo, if you are curious, give a try and see if you will like it by yourself ^^

Honestly, I don't really know what to say.I was trying to read this book for a month now. I am at 7th chapter and it's so boring that reading it for more than 15 seconds without skimming is impossible for me.People here say that character is smart. And while I wouldn't call him stupid, he is definitely not smart. Many things he did were things that just could be done better, and with less work.System as usual is completely unnecessary. He could very well just unlock three talents and be done with it. His talent about beast taming seems best of the three, but it's barely mentioned. He doesn't even use it in fights with monsters. Hellfire is a glass cannon. There was another one but I forgot throughout this arduous month.It feels like I am not reading a fantasy book, but a documentary, and I was never good with lengthy tomes. There is no action, just work work and work.Translation is awful, to the point where mc can have 'a hole in his body' and then completely ignore it. There are 4 or more power systems, each describing the same thing differently.All in all, I should be paid to read this. Because this is work. And I'm not paying to be able to work.

first 40 chapters are pretty good, a bit too much going on with ranks of all sort but good translation and decent story. after ch 40 though, it becomes unreadable. feels like they hijacked a popular story and put it through chatgpt so thentranslators can show their bosses that they did something. from a solid 4/5 to a 1/5. this is a worrying recent trend

A not-so shameless author review here! Let's go straight to the point, first of all, the book is filled with info dumps, that much I can say but the premium chaps have so much lesser than the free ones, you can say that it's some kind of growth in my part as an author. Second, I made a huge blunder of including 20+ chaps of backstory on the main storyline, I know, it ruined the reader's immersive experience with the MC in the story, and I am truly apologetic for that as I indeed regret doing such a thing, if only I could go back in time then I would've uploaded them on a separate volume instead, what a pity! Third, as of now, I am still working to the best of my abilities to improve myself as an author and I think you would be able to see these improvements if you read on? Not entirely sure though, hehe. Finally, the author is super lazy and often procrastinates in socmed to relieve boredom and avoid their writing responsibilities, so if you happen to have socmeds as well, why not motivate(scold) me there by dm'ing one of my accounts? That's all, take care and happy reading!

I'm only 5 chapters in but I do think that's enough for me. There's plenty of grammatical mistakes, just barely enough for comprehension. The writing quality is substandard. It just seems like one of those niche rebirth novels where MC is one way or another OP but lacking some screws in his head. Story development is meh, nothing too special but it's not the most boring either. Some scenes are easily predictable. A bit of a shame, I did think this story had some potential had it been written better.

Man, I came over your story by chance.  I read a  chapter 1 and I'm half with him .. so I hope to continue, I will put your story in the library...

plus points 1 finally no panda instead we have a winter bear(polar bear ice type) second beast is a gold fish with 5-6 horns2 till now no cliche troupe rather totally opposite thing happened in novel while i was sure it would turn into a cliche but to my surprise it didn't 3 no bs op evolution system just a information talent which only shows race, current lvl ,max level possible,skills and their degree of mastry no which evolution material would evolve the beast etc very good thing the world is still in the starting of regaining and similar to the  late mid stage shelters/cities in many zombie apocalypse series or games all in all

This is my review. 1- The novel is very fast from level 0 to level 3 in thirteen chapters. 2- There are no difficulties in his life learning his spell with ease, I understand the author put the tag overpowered, but this tag expresses the strength of the character in his level and not in all his life of studying love etc.  .3- The magic system is frankly weak. You could have followed the magic system in the novel (A Wizard's Secret) and made it difficult to raise the level, and the protagonist's abilities is infinite magic he try testing his magic in several ways to find the best way to rise to a higher level . 4- There is no character building that makes the character feel boring There is nothing special about him such as (1) Does he love knowledge and he has nothing but knowledge in his eyes. 2- Is his personality loving or ruthless. 3- Is his personality weak and getting stronger in The future, or that his character is strong from the beginning. 4- Is he a clever or a fool, etc.) 5- The world is all usual, nothing new, i don't feel any enthusiasm for this world The tiger is the same tiger in a larger size if the author sets strange and dangerous  creatures as an example of a creature  It looks like a diamond, but it has an eye on every side, and when you look at it, you get crazy , the world would be interesting. 6- And this is the most important point for me. There is no big or small goal in the novel trying to become strong for the sake of becoming strong, no more or less and system are trash in general that corrupts the narrative, especially if there is a store feature in it. ......... (I hope my words are not too harsh, but that's how I felt when I read your novel)