Ultimate Ruthless Son-in-Law: My Nine Fiancées Rule the World

What a twist! Pete was finally killed by her own father.

Honestly, this was a big surprise for me.  Here we have a story with a semi-lewd title, where I expected to see a bunch of quasi-sex scenes, where there is some innuendo but nothing that I would be ashamed reading around my mother.  The fun aspect of this is that we have a bunch of interesting events that just want to conspire to kill the guy where he is just barely hanging on by the use of his simulation system.  He also is gaining several interesting abilities, most of which as the reader I do not find a lot of potential in, but the author uses them in very useful ways.This is one of the few that I would hope to read more of.

Overall a good storry, but it has it´s faults as well.First of all the characters, the main character is the only one who we get to know really, the rest just apear for a couple of chapters and become irelevant rather quickly. He rarely has conversations with people that last more than a couple of sentences, it would be nice to increase his relations and interactions with the people arround him. (Idon´t know your future plans so maybe this is already planed) furthermore the mc is becoming more and more powerful physically but he doesn´t show much emotion other than his strict planing. I mean he has crazy high iteligence but everybody has his faults, there are no perfect people.The story development is solely focused on the mc and where he goes, there are some mentions and short pov´s of the villains but nothing major yet. It would be nice to learn more about the backhround and everthing that is going on arround him.The aspect of world background is in my opinion pretty good overall. The only problem I have is that we know where he is, what he does but not much more. We rarely get decriptions of his suroundings or other stuff like this.As a final note, this is my first review of any kind of storry I´v read. So this it probably rather subjective and partly wrong so read it yourself. It is a great story if you like story with an insanely powerful mc who gets stronger and strong in short period of time.Finaly to the author: please try to increase the chapter length, your story is great but it would be even better with longer chapters, this way we as readers can imerse ourselfes more and not just read 5 minutes or so each day and forget what happened the next.P.S. English isn´t my first language so go easy on my gramar

Story plot is really good as well as the writing and pace of the story. Although more details about the characters will enhance the story but over all its wonderful read..I think synopsis should have been a bit more descriptive so that it hooks up the reader.But keep up the good work dear author.:)

A gem. It needs to continue...                                                                                                            

It's such a great novel; feel in love with it. Hopefully you push thru and not drop this hidden gem...................................................................................................................................................

I love this bookkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk.i know I'm just in chapter 10 but i love where this is heading

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