Twilight Archon Supreme

Pls update more chapter!!! Cant wait to read next chapter...................................................................................................

The premise and concept of the book itself are interesting. This might just be my personal preference but I like the idea of the game.And I am excited to see what would happen next to Manu. The author has written it in 1st POV so I expect more details of the ML's thoughts and feelings. also, WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!

amazing story....nice plot....and I love action novels . Especially those martial arts stunt and all.would be looking forward to see more and more drama and martial scenes 💓💓💓💓

I really like the plot it's something that's rare on wn a slice of life realistic fiction, it was like something new I found here.The writing style of the author is damn good it's not too much descriptive but whatever is described is enough to make u see the scene in vivid imagination, character development and plot no need to mention are captivating once started reading I forgot about ch count and kept on turning pages.

Author-san here to give his novel a review, hn.The story is just as the name says, about a human that became a God, the protagonist didn't really believe in Gods but in the end, became one, which is an irony, there's some comedy but not much, it's a world of cultivation and the strong reigns supreme, however, the protagonist had a quite naive idea that he didn't have to get strong faster but it changed after a certain thing happened, I won't say anymore but I hope that with this review, you'll get to understand more of the story, read it and possibly like it.Writing Quality: I won't say it is bad but I won't say it is the best too, there are some small mistakes here and there but only a few of them really affect the reading experience.Stability of Updates: On the start, it was extremely bad and some days, there weren't any chapters, however, now the author (which is me), is posting every day and there are chapters stocked, five of them for now, I will att this when it increases on the comment.Story Development: It is fast-paced on the start, the reason being that I didn't want him to waste time on the Kingdom, however, on the arc of the Birthday Party, the pace slows down and is now on a good pace, enjoyable to read.Character Design: Not really sure of what to say there, sorry, lmao.World Background: The author (me) developed the World Background quite well, explaining some things about the world there and there, on the start, not much information about the Continent he lives at is known but as the story advanced, he got understood how it worked, for now, only three of the Seven Great Sects were introduced but it is rather complete.Enjoy the novel, cya :)

It started pretty good. The character's "system" made him too OP for my liking though. But before the story could really start, it was put on a hiatus...How familiar, are you trying to copycat Togashi in this aspect, Netero1337? xD

Good original novel.Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms. How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.

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