Triune: The broken path

I'm sorry for not using my real account. But really, I enjoy your story. I hope I would find the next chapters everyday

This book is very captivating, detailed and wil get you asking for more. I love it and I recommend it to everyone.

kingdom buildings always start off great but there's only so much you can do and invent without it feeling repetitive. not here yet, though. through his limited, but sizeable, upgrade points, mc has a limited window where he can change his empire massively with his system cheats and i like that he's going out the gates swinging. no rationing or hiding his powers but flaunting them from the beginning because appearances matter! there's an interesting dynamics between the mc and his subjects where there's some closeness in their interactions but also distance that one would expect between a ruler and his subjects.also, you can see the difference in background and status in how the characters talk to each other. those with noble titles tend to have their dialogues written out, while knights and dwarfs for example tend to shorten and combine their words how we usually do nowadays, yknow like don't, comin' etc. and it just gives a nice differenciation between the social statuses of the characters that a lot of authors tend to neglect a little.as for the grammar side of the novel, i'd say 99% great, with some words strangely written but those are few and far between.all in all, a story with promise that will keep you entertained. not on shadow slave or the one about a certain lord fool, but much better than most of the current WN line up. keep it up!

Sister Lily approached him with a smiling face.

"Bagus juga idenya, tapi pasti banyak yang bikin tentang Gunung Padang," ucap Rina yang mulai gelisah, tubuhnya terasa panas dingin.

The sound the heart makes can't be heard without the use of equipments but for Zeus, it was child's play.

"So you're telling me this is King's Cross... Does that mean we're in England?" (Jack)

Then the beautiful woman who looked similar to Jewel on his left began to speak with crystal-like tears in her eyes, her voice sounding melodious like the tinkling of bells. "Jewel, we both know you may be angry with us for leaving you behind and not telling you any of this in person but we have always intended to share everything with you when you were older. Alas the future is uncertain which is why we have prepared this pendant just in case something unforeseen should happen to us. Hopefully this message will never see the light of day and we will always be together but your father and I have always believed in having a backup plan just in case. Finally Jewel, your father and I want you to know that we love you with all are heart, for despite everything we have created, despite all of our wondrous, miraculous, inventions which we hope you will soon see, you truly are and will always be, our greatest creation."