Ten chapters in and I already find myself hooked up with the story! I loved Jay and the Black dragon 😂 Jay's internal monologue was funny. Storyline and characters are really interesting! The plot pace is good, not too slow or fast. Keep that up 😊 Updates are also stable 👍Writing is good but there are few grammar mistakes eg: you put internal thoughts in quotation marks too, so reader can get confused it it's a thought or dialogue. For the rest of the minor errors, the author can use Grammarly tool to edit chapters and they will be easily fixed. That will help a lot 😊But otherwise the story is engaging and interesting. Would definitely recommend readers to give it a try ☺️ Good luck with your novel author and keep it up! 🥰
Good novel, with some spelling errors, up until chapter 31 where the authors forgets to add resistance from sorcery lvl up, which are 10 points. Even worse at chapter 40 the author increases the resistance by 30 (with the 10 missing) / 20 (if you use the value which it should have) without an explanation. So a drop for me. Bye.
tell me how there is a manhwa in the process of being written on this novel when it hadn't been updated in 3 months. the novels is great however and I recommend it. I hope the author doesn't drop it.
fucking awesome! this is what a great story should read like ! love it ! this needs to be made into a movie , the author is a genius , a visionary , a pioneer in originality . yo this novel is really good , immersive , thrilling and exciting , keep it going and keep it coming , i'm hungry for more , don't tease me , give me satisfaction , i need more chapters !
Title is just ٩(˃̶͈̀௰˂̶͈́)و ╮ (￣ 3￣) ╭ alluring and stuff. Harem sounds good but I think it can improve but I’m not a professional so yeah~~~~~~~~~~ why did you stop writing completely??
This is an amazing novel. At the Beginning you can see Silver adjusting to his new life in his new body. And I quite like how Silver slowly exposes his knowledge and skills, not too slow no too fast. In all honesty the novel is awesome and deserves praise! Just keep up the good work and pump those chapters harder than Saitama's punches!
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