Transmigrated to Primitive world with a system

I’m really sick of the author being wishy washy with Nicole and Jared, have Jared knock Harvey out and Nicole take on the nasty Fisher lady. It’s disgusting that you should lose respect over a story that should have been about the love growing between Jared and Nicole not  Harvey

One of my favorite novels in this site. It's a joy reading. The characters feel real. The environment descriptions are vivid. The novel is like wine, it begins very slow but gets better with time. You get attached to the characters and can't wait for new chapters to come out. The downside is a lack of comedic reliefs but maybe it will change with time.

Amazing novel author keep up the good work but please we need update so please an please always update the novel please...............................

Its a fanfic, so why is it in the novel section? And why are the chapters locked?.............................................................

The idea behind the book was good enough, had the potential to be great even but the execution was disappointing. At first I tried to bear with it but couldn't after a while. For one the plot holes were annoying and this is coming from someone who usually doesn't mind plot holes much.There was also a lot of unnecessary commentary which is common in other novels of the same genre so it would have been somewhat forgivable if not for the fact that the unnecessary commentary was also unnecessarily long. What should have been fleshed put wasn't and what didn't need to be was.As for the characters themselves, I won't say they were terrible but some of their actions or reactions to certain events really felt unnantural and/or forced. Like they were doing something, or only existed in the first place because there was supposed to be some such character or some such event.I'm neither an author nor a sophisticated reader but I do understand the trials in trying to write a book which is why I don't usually write reviews, I usually just rate it and leave it at that and even then only if I feel it was good because if it wasn't I'd just not rate it or review it. Writing is hard work, even if you're particularly talented you still have to put the time and effort in to make any decent sort of work. The only reason I'm writing this review now is that I feel that this had the potential to be so much better. I've read similar books which I loved and this reminded me a little of them, not in the plagiarism sense but in the vibe it gave. With a good editor and less overdone tropes it could have been a gem that's all.

trash story..............................

"You must produce an attack skill. Not defense, not Enhancement." She said, I smiled.

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