Transmigrated as a Ghost

A very good premise at the start.

The world building and update stability are quite good, but I have to admit that I find the character design and story development severely lacking.

The MC is naive to the point of stupidity up to chapter 100. He gets conned and betrayed to easily imo, not to mention the constant repeat mistakes. He talks to himself 80% of the time, and half of that is to remind himself not to repeat past mistakes. Yet, a few chapters later, he will be berating himself again that he is stupid and repeating his errors. The MC can be borderline stupid, but blatantly saying and repeating how stupid the MC is every 10 or so chapters, does not bode well for the book. At least make him seem smart is what I'm trying to say.

The story development was fine, even when he was masquerading as a woman for 70% of it (sweat) 😰. But, that bomb drop at chapter 99 was too huge! I will be honest, I couldn't really tell who the target audience was for half the book. But it was interesting enough to stop me from investigating. The reason for this is quite simple, 99% of male audience can read novels about male MCs turning into animals, insects, ghosts etc. But to have them transgender is a huge taboo. I understand that it's 2022 and the lines are somewhat blurred nowadays. But, if you are writing a novel targeted at MALE audience, you SHOULD NOT transgender the MALE MC and LITERALLY put that he lost himself. It's too much, my brother.

I literally had to back pedal at chapter 99 and check if this novel had an LGBTQ tag that I somehow missed. I even had to question myself and ask if I was being misguided for reading those 99 chapters. That's just how big an impact your chapter 99 had on me. I don't think that the sequence of events leading up to it were intentional, but the end result was questionable to say the least.

At least, that's my two cents on those two issues. Otherwise, the book is readable and I would recommend it to female readers, or those who don't mind the blurred lines.

Overall, I give this book 3.8 out of 5 but that's mainly for the writing quality, world building, and the somewhat unconventional plot. The MC setting and plot progression seems quite sketchy imo though.

P.S. Please allow the MC to do ghostly things. You promised ghosts, so you should give ghosts.

So far, this is an AMAZING story that immediately grabbed my attention. The grammar is great for the most part, the story isn't too predictable or boring at all, and the MC's descriptive and action packed adventures keep you wanting more. My only regret is that I found this hidden gem while it only has 76 chapters.  Finally, a unique twist on an isekai. Thank you Author! I can't wait to read more!

Is a novel about a ghost MC, except he does nothing ghostly after a while. Basically just a human with a couple extra abilities. Also, the MC is very dumb and it's a gender bender novel.

You gotta be a special type of stupid to create a novel about "GHOSTS" but have him in a human form most of the time. The amount of failure that you have to pull just to screw up your whole novel by not even making use of the name... Like I get that you didn't want to write a good novel, but you didn't have to make it almost as terrible as those novels where the mc turns into something else but hates it so he instantly ruins it by getting a human form, Wait that's exactly what you've done here, you made a failure of a novel and now you use a human form because you had no idea how to write a novel about a ghost. Great job author, I try to be respectful to most authors but you just don't deserve it because you ruin your novel, make the readers wait through your terrible plot, and somehow find a way to ruin a topic that isn't really written about thus giving you so many different ways to write it. So for anyone wanting to read this, you might as well look for a different novel about a danny phantom at this point. I don't think many people here even read 1 chapter since this novel got the deserved 4.09 stars(Minus the 1 star I'm giving you) so for any of those poor fools thinking about reading this, don't.

Though, I already stopped reading, but I felt like I should put a review in case author decides to go through his reviews and see what he might need to work on when writing another book.

First of, I say 5 star for update becaue I dont know about the update stability and there is already over 800 chapters.

Every other aspects lacks so badly, the ghost design was written really properly.

I mean he is a ghost but cannot see in the dark with or without a physic body. Him getting ambushed in dark by monsters/spirit like being or what that was in the first 40 chapters is weird.

Cant remember all the reason why I stopped reading this as it has been a while but the writing skill about a ghost as a main charater needs massive improvement.

What I do think is that author is wrote the character using the traits of a human instead of a ghost.

Anyway, goodluck to you improving, I'm not criticizing here but I'm stating what I feel it lacked. I dont know of chapters past the 50s, so there might have been improvement.

Thank you .

Having read over 500 books on webnovel this is the best book I’ve ever read for that I am giving the author 5 stars and if I could give the book more than I would love to give it 100 stars

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