Top Gun Unlimited

Let this novel be praised!

BROOO, I love the way you write. It has a very smooth and unique flow. You got loads of talents. Keep writing. Your story has the drama, the intensity, basically anything a reader will ask.

A great world background, characters are great writing on point over all a great novel.
I am not really fond of systems but loved this one due to the emotion backstory.
Keep up great work author

World and what a world it is, without a doubt one of the best descriptions of the world I have ever read.

I was just a little scared to see that you have spent some time without writing, my friend, don't give up on this amazing story.[img = recomendar]

The story is great! It has a lot of potential into it! I think this is going to be awesome in the future! So far, after reading the first few chatpers, I believe this novel is amazign!  I commented the things that I think needs editting!

I'd like to note that the events felt a bit sudden. It would be fantastic if you could establish the narration first before placing the system. Let' say that the man was weak, like you've said, author. And in that world/village, violence was always the key. Survival of the fittest. Therefore, he needs to do something. It would be better to explain first the situation he was into. Let the thug beat him up. Show the main protagonist he was not meant to wield a gun, but in the end, he was the "top gunner" in the story. In that way, you can make the story more interesting! feel free to disagree, and these are only my suggestions~ Kudos for the author!

Author, I am telling you with the right character development, this one can turn out to be a great novel, Theme is GUN SYSTEM is very well selected, a new concept, keep on going, waiting for new releases, already added it in my library

Loved the story's background and setting as well as the characters I read. The author has a vivid imagination and has created a world for us to enjoy! Great Job!

I really like this novel, it's super engaging and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next ٩(◕‿◕)۶ . I will be adding this to my collection