So far read the first chapter and find it quite interesting. The characters' names are cool and the way the author designs them is fabulous. World development is something it makes you lost in the story.....Cheer up author .....its a good read
volume one is about gangs and stuff. i didn't like it, but then, i just pushed myself to read and hoped that the grammar and story would be better. after volume one, which is the two, it started to show about the apocalypse stuff. so far, the story is just starting even though the chapters were long. it is starting to become amazing. i hope to read more.
An overall good story ruined by the progressively worsening grammarA very comprehensive story that contains many elements in a story about war + modern elements + supernatural elementsProtagonist has morals, principles, cheats and cunning
Everything was good at the beginning. But after a few chapters, the name of the protagonist changed several times and his gender also changed. Obviously, there is no transletor. Webnovel simply copied and pasted MTL chapters.
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I will leave this review for now and make changes later on. I just want to encourage more authors/writers to make more kingdom building novels and also contribute to get this novel some what attention to a larger audiences.
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