Timelock

"Sorry, tell me when I get home tonight! See you then!" he said as he rushed out.

"You wouldn't understand unless you fought him yourself.... I know for a fact that I would still get my ass kicked if I tried to fight him again right now" he said with a shiver

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

Eu gostei da rota da vingança por isso eu fiquei esperando até chegar nos capítulos que o MC começou a mudar finalmente... só que quando chegou nos capítulos bons aí eu percebi que o Autor deixou esse pra trás pra fazer a outra rota sem terminar essa, Autor a gente esperou chega no ponto bom da história então por favor atualiza os capítulos pelo menos no mesmo nível da outra rota que já tem mais de 400+

The lore of this book interests me, it has a lot of potential, it reminds me of Dant's Inferno

A story of a war maiden and the sin of gluttony.....I think. I can see how much potential it has especially with a beginning like that. It's an interesting story, though grammatical errors and words structures are off on almost every chapter.  The story is interesting overall. and I recommend Grammarly app for editing