Really good book in my opinion. The main character is a person from Earth who has transmigrated into the body of a prince, and his power is to see the luck of people as halos with colors representing luck levels. His is pitch black, the embodiment of unluckiness though 👌.
This story was great the plot and specially it's characters. And for me, I really like it so much that I will recommend it to others for them to read. I'm not being bias here, it just that it get to my heart and my mind. I wish you will give us some wonderful work in the future. Thank you!!! I really love it. Fantastic and magnificent, I think this words can describe how perfect your story is. Even though that I'm more on, in an action story with a touch of fantasy, I really really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable, also I really like it, thank so much.
I can see that the author tried his best to make it epic. There's nice worldbuilding, though I would like it if you stretched that more. The main problem is stretching... your story looked too easy... stretch it, make ot more difficult and make it as believable as possible.There are quite a few grammatical errors... you should solve them asap, especially the punctuations.The writing style is easy on the eye with a bit of fixing it would be even more promising... Good luck... Author.
This is a very interesting Novel I love the plot and especially the virtual reality system, I also love how shameless the mc is and am looking forward to seeing him steamroll people. I just hope that he doesn't start chasing after girls so heavily especially when it will lead to a lot of minor problems instead of trying to make his own empire especially since he took out loans and will have a lot of issues irl if he doesn't focus on progress.
Cool story with really decent update schedule. I cannot wait for this to finish so that I can binge it all in one go. Even fifteen chapters have hooked me on it and caused me to leave this review.
Bruh .I forced myself to keep reading based on 'MC will get better ' and ' story will get better . How much more torture do i have to endure, how many more braincells do i have to sacrifice before this actually gets better???!!!
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