It's just not good... I wouldn't recommend this. As for why, look for the most liked reviews. - Coming from someone who have read the raw version of the novel.
The plot was interesting so I was expectant. Didn't expect that as soon as the missions began, the development of the story would be very awkward, or should I say forced. I stopped reading at exactly chapter 10.
really glad you started updating again. I can start your 2nd book. was holding off as it seemed you dropped this one. great story arc, character's are very well developed!!! keep the updates coming
All the review writers are spambots, and I've read the book. Not really interesting, you know, the regular type of books that you read. I think it has potential but it needs to be developed more
I'm glad this story got continued, I had read it before and I find the whole thing interesting. I hope the author can keep up the good work. It was I nice story to read especially when you like fantasy type genre.
sigh....I have been waiting an eternity for the author to continue this great story.so listen to my ranting Title: A Heartfelt Tribute to a Talented AuthorIt is with a bittersweet mix of emotions that I write this heartfelt review for an author who, regrettably, chose to discontinue their remarkable book. With every page, this author effortlessly transported readers into a captivating world filled with vivid characters and gripping narratives. Their talent for storytelling was nothing short of extraordinary, leaving readers hungry for more with each passing chapter.The author's prose danced across the pages, weaving a tapestry of emotions that resonated deeply with readers. The characters they created were multidimensional, flawlessly capturing the essence of the human experience. From moments of heart-wrenching vulnerability to exhilarating triumphs, the author had an unparalleled ability to make us laugh, cry, and reflect on our own lives.As the story unfolded, the author skillfully wove intricate plotlines that kept us on the edge of our seats, yearning for resolution. The twists and turns were unexpected yet satisfying, revealing a masterful command of storytelling and a keen understanding of pacing.It is a profound loss for readers and literary enthusiasts alike that this author made the difficult decision to halt their book's progress. The world they created was a sanctuary, a place to escape to and find solace during challenging times. Their absence will be deeply felt, as the characters and their stories have become a cherished part of our literary landscape.However, despite the disappointment of an unfinished tale, I remain grateful for the chapters we were able to experience. This author's words have left an indelible mark on our hearts, reminding us of the power of literature to transport, inspire, and transform.To the author, though you may have chosen a different path, your talent and imagination have left an indelible imprint on the literary world. Your book will forever hold a special place in the hearts of those who had the privilege of embarking on that journey with you.As readers, we will eagerly await the day when your pen finds its ink once again, and your words grace the pages of another captivating tale. Until then, we offer our sincerest gratitude for the extraordinary gift of your storytelling and the emotions you evoked through your artistry.May your future endeavors be filled with success and fulfillment, and may the world once again be captivated by your boundless imagination and literary prowess.With the deepest appreciation,[Nameless]
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