three arm shadow

An extremely well written story. A real quality work. But, there needs at least 10chaps/day for it to truly be perfect 😉.....,................................,.................. .......

So far, I'm really enjoying the story even though most characters are one-dimensional. It's still fun overall. However, the name changes are annoying. Victor is now Achilles. Lear becomes Li Er then back to Lear. Sometimes, dialogues seem to be attributed wrongly. It's disruptive and incredibly irritating.

wish it was being continued. it has good character development. it also moves fast enough to keep you from getting bored.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  .

So far a great story, the mc is a newb exploring a world because of a fanfic he read based on it. The character has the qualities of a pro in the making.

very good read. I found this story from Wattpad.

The characters are expressed nicely. The story is really interesting. Their feelings for each other and the way they care for each other I loved that. Author keep it up.....

I like the "old veteran" type of of MC. The protagonist is already experienced, sometimes power progression feels a little repetitive so skipping all that 'growing up' character development can make it easier on the readers. But it comes at the cost of the person's innocence. A typical young and naive MC can feel a little stupid at times but we can be immersed in their individual perspective and character developments and understand why a character would make certain kinds of choices afterwards. By literally combining the 2 into the same body I feel happy getting the best of both worlds. Evin utilizing the valuable wisdom that comes with age while also experiencing moments of first time innocence and ignorance is just so adorable.

interesting story i will give it a try ❤️