Thee Fallen Hero

It was a good start loved the intresting and intriguing setting of the story can't wait to read more..... the introduction of the villian was nice i hope to see more character development still but overall it was nice

A newbie huh, well it's a good start. It seems like a nice intro to the story, is this the summary of the story? Cuz the villain was showed a bit early when the characters are not introduced properly yet. Well it should be a interesting read
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This chapter is just awesome can't wait for next chapter.

good one everyone should give it a try for a newbie you did well

omgg!! it was so fun i am really waiting for new chapter!! one question is akira gonna be the strongest? or when he becomes the villian he gets taken down by some hero??

This is so goood!!! Keep it up bro the story and characters are amazing! I hope to see more from u ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

it was an interesting read waiting for further chapters and kinda excited to see how this hero falls and becomes a villian keep it up

okay, i will be honest just read the first chapter seems interesting and can have alot of potential i hope the author really goes into depths of the characters especially the mc cause he have to totally change his heroic persona to a dark villian i hope it will be interesting