The White Rose: A Killer's Rebirth

Another cuckold protagonist. He is incredibly pathetic and subservient to women. It's as if the author not only enjoys but even yearns for humiliation. The MC likes to be taken advantage of. The translation is not good, if it's even translation and not an MTL. The family aspect of the story sucks. So much unnecessary baggage and so many cliche plotlines because of it. It would have been infinitely better if he was solo.

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As other reviewers have pointed out, this story nabbed the title and synopsis from 重生红龙:自律就变强 but has a completely different plot from that. There's no "translating" being done here for a Chinese novel of that name.Story itself, while having noticeable inconsistencies, is still decent. I don't particularly dislike the story so far. But the title and synopsis having absolutely no correlation with how the story is progressing is kinda bothersome. Masquerading as a translation of a novel instead of just posting this as an original story seems suspicious.

I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!

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A novel for a true pussy, for a true wuss. The MC can not even be considered to be a man. Damn, the plot is good but why make the MC like that? A cock-tease and a pussy. Nice writing by the way but wrong character development. Making an R-18 novel and perverted MC with no dick.

I am very glad that I gave this story a read. The author did such a fabulous job on this story  The characters were all unique in their own way and you got to know each one of their personalities and story in such a way that it was not overwhelming. I loved the way the storyline developed. Fantastic read. I will be searching for more from this author.

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