The White Room Chronicles

can someone explain the first chapter with some sort of referenceby that I mean what is it he is seeingIs this a Pokémon fan fictionI stopped at chapter 1 due to it not being clear to myself wtf is going on with his vision

This novel is quite good but still need improvement.There is the writing skill and other matters that need improvement for the sake of the story. Beside, there's still a long journey for the success of the novel.

Nice plot. Loved it. Quick and progressive storyline .

Good.                                                                                                                                                              

First off, I absolutely love your book cover it's really cool. I like your plot and it's concept. The character build-up is also very good. You're doing a good job, keep it up.

Broooooooo the other author made this a quick read but it was such a great story with details. Each character has a different personalty and at the end it makes u want to know what happened later. Definitely something to recommend to ur friends

racism,only racism, this novel tells us that Japan is one of the the worst place to live and It also compares China and it is the best in everything.

Okay so I believe that the story has potential. However, the first thing I noticed which I feel is incorrect is your title. Why not try changing the title to this instead: Man, Monster, or God? . I suggest this because your title has a punctuation error as the comma's and question marks clash. Also, try using Grammarly to check for grammatical and punctuation errors, that way your sentences will flow smoothly. Overall, keep up the good work.