The villains road to immortality

it started out cool but then a level character started to come out of nowhere, I don’t know if they’re rare hunters or Chinese cabbages, the MC takes a taxi and has an SS hunter there, the MC walks out on the street and meets a woman SS, MC is in the F level room in college but he really has a level S teacher, I believe that if MC throws bread on the street, 15 level S hunters will come out of the manhole, totally anti-climatic

It's boring and uncreative, and there's no real conflict anywhere. But you probably already knew that from looking at the summary.What you might not know is how badly translated this is. Have you every heard of the Wuxing realm? Ever had a MC cast a "supernormal knowledge spell"? Yeah, me neither.

I cerrtanly been catch up whit the history. I like the backdrawn and also the characters. I like the fact that she is very fiercy,  i hope she take her revenge and more than anything accomplish happines!

Kinda crazy how every review I see rates this novel pretty highly. The world background isn’t much to look at in this novel and the pacing jumps around and is confusing. The character design isn’t much, the MC is basically a loser that doesn’t go to school so that he can game elsewhere and he gets himself into problems where it’s not his business and that he can’t back himself up. The cultivation of the novel is confusing because once again nothing is explained and somehow the MC gains a new element of magic from just repeated killing.

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to tell you the truth readers.. This is definitely not recommend novel because the writing quality Is so worse even me that has almost 4 years reading experience Chinese,Japanese, english novel i already experience it how terrible Chinese translation are... This novel is worse than Chinese novel it seem 16 years old maybe or lower maybe write it and just quite new at english language. And i hate quite story development because it was so fast as if the heaven helping him or lets just say in Chinese Novels "World Law" as if he was heaven child and i hate system too... because it came from the system power he was just like low exercise and get multiple ℅ strength i mean it came from system power and even knowledge why don't you just give him op knowledge like level 1 dont have knowledge suddenly have heaven defying knowledge because of unknow encounter even people didn't know ya know what i mean i will not explain anymore because it was wasting my knowledge even it can only last 24 chapter as if this is masterpiece but not really because of the writing quality

This is just personal preference, please don’t take this as criticism on the work.I like this story, I really do. I have some issues with the way the characters are written however. So far I’m at chapter 26. The main characters are cold and unfeeling to the circumstances of the other characters. Quick to resort to the idea of killing other characters before they can do anything wrong. Now this wouldn’t be too strange, but these people were literally highschool students before transmigration. My last issue is that the main characters don’t treat the other side characters as “human”. I know that sounds a little ridiculous considering to them they literally are characters from a game they played, but it’s not really a game anymore. Maybe this changes later in the story but for now it’s really off-putting and I can’t bring myself to read anymore.This next part is criticism for the story. Please understand that this is not malicious. I do wish that the characters were a little more fleshed out. I understand that some parts of a story are intended to be intentionally vague, but I don’t think it works that well for this kind of story. The main characters feel 2 dimensional, like they’re lacking depth in their reasoning. My last criticism is that there is a weird amount of plot convenience. Specifically, the part where it talks about Nathan being an experienced person about knife combat. There was exactly no hint about that character having the experiences of someone who needed to wield a knife in the modern world.Now since I have criticized the story I feel the need to completely certain aspects as well. This is a 4 star review after all. I really enjoyed the concept of this story. The world around them was not really fleshed out that well, but it was written well in the parts where there was World building.Anyway, I hope that you continue writing stories. I look forward to more of your works.

Unfortunately had to quit after the first chapter.I am confident in saying that whoever wrote or translated this didn't read it twice. All the errors made it jarring to read.